Monday, March 7, 2011

Flowers Rough Draft

Feminist Critical Analysis for The Flowers
For my critical analysis I am going to be using the feminist criticism. One of the aspects feminist critics focus on when analyzing a text according to Instructor Stacey Knapp is, “exploring how images of men or women in literature might reflect or reject the social norms around gender in a particular society”. (Knapp, 9.7) In the novel there are three main women whom of which all face their own stereotypes. Sylvia plays both an unconventional and conventional role of a woman yet her unconventional role still falls into a stereotype in which a lot of women face. Cindy while being considered an unconventional woman also falls prey to what a stereotypical woman might be. Nica would have to be the most classically stereotypical woman of all who plays a large role in the book. In the novel The Flowers by Dagoberto Gilb, the main women in the novel Sylvia, Cindy, and Nica all have roles that in their own individual ways conform to the general stereotypes that women face.
The first woman in the novel who plays a stereotypical role for women in the novel is Sylvia. Sylvia is Sonny’s mother who in the beginning of the novel played a more unconventional role in the book. In the earlier portion of the novel Sylvia is shown to be highly concerned with her physical appearance and her social life. In most of the descriptions Sonny gives about his mom in the beginning parts of the novel, he talks a lot about her looks and how she is a very pretty woman. “She was wearing a flower dress—I think roses, though I call all flowers roses—a new one, and shiny red shoes that matched. She was being too pretty like always.” (Flowers, p. 10) He talks of her enjoying shopping and getting new clothes and of her spending lots of time on making her physical appearance appealing. Later after meeting Clyde we are shown how she attempts to make herself seem like the conventional mother who puts a lot of energy into tending to her son which in reality is not what goes on in her home. “She came over and sat on the armrest of the couch, next to me. She touched my hair… ‘Don’t you m’ijo?’ She had no idea. We never talked nothing about me.” (Flowers, p. 12) After Sylvia marries Clyde she then tries to take on the role of the typical housewife in order to please her husband. In the novel we see how Sylvia wants her husband to see her as a good little housewife through her not wanting him to find out that her salsa is not homemade and instead store bought. “He might as well have complimented her on the tortilla chips, because she bought them at a store too. She didn’t correct him though.” (Flowers, p. 51) Another woman in the novel The Flowers who plays an unconventional yet still stereotypical role is Cindy.
Cindy is a conventional woman in the sense that she stays at home all day while her husband is away at work but in every other way she is what appears to be an unconventional type of woman. When forced to stay at home Cindy is forced to wallow in her discontent with no one to keep her company. “’It’s nice to have someone here,’ she said “’I never get any company.’” (Flowers, p. 42) That is until Sonny moves into the apartment complex. When Cindy meets Sonny she starts to enjoy his company and later takes it a step further by kissing him. She later takes it even farther by having sex with Sonny in her and her husband’s apartment. “She put my hand under her T-shirt. Then she put her hand on me. She led me to the bedroom. She took off her top and her cut-off sweats—no underwear. She fell on her back…” (Flowers, p. 124) These acts make Cindy an unconventional type of woman because the conventional stay at home wife would not be cheating on her husband when he is away from work. Again, while Cindy plays an unconventional role her role is also deemed stereotypical as well by her looking to men for a sense of self-worth or happiness. While Cindy is considered an unconventional woman, Nica on the other hand, is a very conventional and stereotypical woman.
            Nica is definitely the most conventional and stereotypical woman of all within the novel. In the book Nica is described to be a quiet woman of few words at least earlier on. Nica is also forced to stay at home while her parents are away at work. While she is to stay at home her responsibilities include tending to the upkeep of the house and watching over her baby brother. “’I’m right outside here!’ she told her brother. ‘I’m not going anywhere!’” (Flowers, p. 47) Nica is considered to be a very stereotypical woman because the stereotypical woman is always thought to be the cooker, the cleaner, and the mother. Nica be it willing or unwilling is forced into this stereotype. You can see in the novel that Nica wants to be able to break away from that life and leave the apartment with Sonny to go have fun like a normal teenager. Unfortunately she hesitates because she is fearful of the consequences she would receive if her parents found out.
            In conclusion, the author Dagoberto Gilb places women in his novel who all face their own typical stereotypes. Sylvia plays roles of both conventional and unconventional stereotypical roles of women. She does this through in the beginning of the novel, primping herself to make her look more appealing to men then later flipping to a typical housewife persona to attempt to please her husband. Cindy also plays the roles of both conventional and unconventional stereotypical women. She does this through her staying at home all day while her husband is away at work and by her infidelity when it comes to being with Sonny. Nica plays a very conventional stereotypical role of a woman. She does this by staying at home all day while tending to the house and her baby brother. In the novel The Flowers, author Dagoberto Gilb places Sylvia, Cindy, and Nica in the book, who all face general stereotypes of women in a number of different ways.

Work Cited
http://www.instructorknapp.blogspot.com Critical Theories. Section 9.7
Gilb, Dagoberto. The Flowers. Grove Press New York, 2008
               









Sunday, March 6, 2011

Metacognitive Thinking

I’ve always noticed that while reading I tend to struggle with really being able to take in all of the information that I was reading. I always thought that I had some sort of reading comprehension problem. My actual reading abilities are quite well. I have always been able to be a “speed reader” but like I said above I had issues really grasping the full concepts of what I was trying to read. In class when we talked about metacognitive reading I thought I’d give it a try and really focus on what it was that I was reading. To do this, I turned off all noises that might distract me when I was reading such as the television or my music. I was in a quiet room all by myself. It shocked me at how much that helped me with my understanding of the text. I am now doing that with all of the reading that I do except sometimes I do not always read out loud. This technique really has improved my comprehension not only with this novel but with all of my other readings for my other classes. I am absolutely loving it. I have been really good so far this semester with planning out my time for reading. Going into things this semester I made it a point to make sure that I stayed on track with all of my reading for my classes. I for the most part have been pretty successful with doing just that. I have been able to have scheduled time to do my reading which is usually something I struggle greatly with. I nanny part time every other day and luckily the little girl I watch takes naps. Her nap time gives me a good two hours to do any required reading that I may have to do as well as any other homework assignments that I need to get done. So far overall I would say that I’ve done a rather good job at putting a concentrated effort into fully understanding what it is I am reading as well as finding appropriate times to get my reading done on time.

Character Description: Sylvia


                Sylvia is the mother of Sonny and his older sister. She appears to be, at least in the beginning of the novel, to be more self involved rather than really dealing with her kids and handling her motherly responsibilities. This is displayed in the novel in a number of different circumstances. For example when Sonny has to go to court, he speaks of how his mother pretends to be concerned in front of the judge. “My mother had to be there with me too. She had to take off from work and listen and act like she was all worked up about me too, which she wasn’t. I knew it…” (p.4) Another time where you see her tending to herself rather than her children is also right in the beginning of the novel when Sonny is sitting in his living room eating his T.V. dinner alone with his dog. She’s out doing whatever it is she is doing and Sonny is left to deal with a drunken man who storms his house looking for his mom, “…and before I even get near the door I would feel the pounding on it through the floor and I heard some man yelling at it loud and he is beating on it, so hard that it’s shaking and rattling.” (p.6) A lot of what we hear about Sylvia is her talking on the phone a lot and concerning herself greatly with her appearance and with men. In my opinion, it seems that she cares more about her own personal happiness opposed to the happiness and best interest of her son, Sonny. She consistently chooses herself over her son and this characteristic of Sylvia is shown through her meeting with Clyde and her later marriage to him. When marrying Clyde, she ends up pulling her son away from his home, moving him into an apartment with some stranger to him, ripping Sonny away from his dog Goofy who he loved so much. This is just one example of her selfish tendencies that play a dramatic role in Sonny’s life. By taking him away from his home, Sonny was forced to live with a man who could also care less about Sonny’s overall happiness just like Sonny’s mom Sylvia. Where his mother Sylvia does make a lot of decisions that appear to only be in her best interest, you know that she does love her son even if she doesn’t always take into consideration Sonny’s happiness. This is primarily shown though only when you see Sylvia start to become unhappy with her relationship with Clyde. She starts to see how Clyde is taking advantage of her son so she starts to try to help out her son almost as if she were in a way trying to make up for bringing him there in the first place. Sylvia isn’t necessarily a bad mother, she is just a mother who unfortunately has a problem with placing her children’s needs above her own. Inside she genuinely does care about them, but while she does care about them, she has her own needs that she feels take priority.

Sunday, February 6, 2011

My mother never...

My mother never traveled. She never got to see the world or go on an adventure. She hates to fly which is completely absurd to me. I on the other hand love to fly. Nothing is more beautiful than looking out of the window of an airplane and seeing fluffy white clouds beneath you. I want to do all sorts of things. I want to travel the world and see all the glorious land marks they have to offer. I want to be able to look in my passport and see stamp after stamp of all the places that I have been. Not like my mom who doesn't even have a passport. My dad did it right. He has traveled all through Europe and was able to meet a handful of interesting new people along the way. My dad once told me the story of the time he back packed through Europe with his brother and a friend. They hopped on train after train going from country to country without ever having a legitimate plan. They slept in train stations, hostiles, wherever they could with no worries at all. I only wish I had the freedom to do such exciting things as that. I want to be able to bunjee jump in New Zealand. I want to zip line through a rain forest. One day I will go on a gondola ride in Italy and ride the worlds biggest ferris wheel in Singapore. I want to go to Germany and see Anne Frank's secret annex and visit Russia to see their unique architecture. One day I will go to France to see the Eiffle Tower and the Notre Dame. I love my mom with all my heart, but I don't want to end up like her. She didn't get to do anything exciting like that and I want to do it all. I want to one day be able to tell my future kids of all the exciting things i did when i was young. I want to tell them all about my adventures and watch them be awestruck when hearing of the time their mom went skydiving. Not only will I tell them of all the things I got to do, but I will make it a priority as a parent to show my kids the world when they are young since that is something I never really got to experience with my family. How I would have loved to have been able to share my first out of country experience with my family. I love my mom with all of my heart but in this aspect I do not wish to be like her. She always speaks of how she wishes she would have been able to travel more. She frequently speaks of how she would really love to be able to see Washington D.C. Unfortunately she has not yet gone and has no future plans of doing so. I want to do more than just talk about these things and I know in my heart that over time I will get to do all the things I want to do and travel the world. I will not settle for anything less.

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Saturday, February 5, 2011

I Am...

I am Lachelle Ourricariet. I am nineteen years old and this is my third semester at Gavilan Community College. I have three sisters who mean absolutely everything to me. I always feel blessed knowing that I have my sisters there for me. In the future I hope to become a High School english teacher. I have known that I've wanted to be a teacher ever since i was in second grade but it wasn't until High School that I realized how much I love to write and that I want to teach english for a living.